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Thursday, January 27, 2011

Poetry: Haiku Flying Puppy

FLD Gus comes flying when called!


"flying puppy"

I merely called "come"
little black Lab wheeled and launched
transformed super-pup!


3 comments:

  1. random and cute lol but it aint followin the rules of a haiku
    # of syllables
    1st line- 2, 2nd line- 4, 3rd line- 6, 4th line-8, 5th line- 2

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  2. Well, Anonymous, I am very confused. First, there are only 3 lines to my Haiku, "flying puppy" and the rules of a Haiku are 17 syllables, 5-7-5 in the 3 lines. Hmmmmmm.....perhaps you are using a translation program that does not translate from English very well?

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  3. I like your dog

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