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Showing posts with label FIB. Show all posts
Showing posts with label FIB. Show all posts

Monday, March 28, 2011

Poetry: A Flying Puppy FIB

FLD GUS:  FLYING PUPPY

FLD Gus has this flying-thing going on lately.  Everywhere he goes, he LEAPS.  LEAPS onto his mat, LEAPS through the snow to find a place to "park," LEAPS over puddles of slush at the corner when we cross the street.

It is as if he has springs for legs.

The other morning, he decided that a comfortable place to chew his Kong was ON MY LAP.  I was sitting on a low rocking chair and he sat facing me, red Kong hanging out the side of his mouth like a cigar.  Without warning, without coiling to spring, he SPRANG straight UP and landed on my lap, light as a feather!

What control!  What precision!

Andy was relaxing on the recliner across from me.  After a few moments of uncontrolled giggling, I said, I wish you could have seen him from this angle!

After a few more moments of unabashed guffawing, Andy replied, "I was wishing you could have seen him from my angle!"

Oh silly puppy.  Those aren't wings, but springs! 




A FIB IN RESPONSE


          "puddle-jumping puppy"

          spring
          wings
          take air--
          precision
          in 53 pounds--
          Labrador learns levitation




Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Poetry: A FIB for the Dog Days of Summer

Too hot for my liking, or FLD Mike's either, I think.  A short walk early in the morning and Mike plops to the floor as soon as we re-enter the house.  He is more content to hang out in the air-conditioning!  Here's my "torrid 10-month-old," another "FIB" inspired by FLD Mike's reaction today.


torrid 10-month-old

freight
train
lab drools
cool on tile
sprawled beside the door
summer swelter shortens our walk


Thursday, June 10, 2010

Poetry: A FIB Variation

Yesterday evening, Andy and I took FLD Mike and Gypsy to Metro Beach for a walk.  It is wonderful to be able to take our dogs into the park now.  Previously, dogs were prohibited, although Future Leader Dogs have always been allowed.  There are numerous opportunities for distraction training.  FLD Mike is a week away from his 9-month birthday, and mild-mannered as he is, he still challenges me during this adolescent phase!  The following poem was inspired by our visit to the Beach.

I expanded this "FIB" to 10-lines, reversing the number of syllables in each line after the sixth eight-syllable line, to highlight my struggle with distracted FLD Mike this night.  Try it yourself; leave me a FIB of your own in the comments box!  It's fun.



"almost-9-months-un-neutered-lab"


Coast-
line
heel--Mike
strains against
command, his teen-brain
coursing testosterone, coerced
to opposition.
Mike.  Heel.
I
win. 
 

Friday, May 28, 2010

Poetry: A May FIB

"caught"

too
hot
to do
much else but
hang out in the cool
-Mike's last thoughts before his head drops




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Friday, April 30, 2010

Poetry: "4:15 am"

In honor of "Poetry Month" (April), here is another FIB in my Leader Dog Poem series.  This is a typical occurrence when we suffer through the potty-training phase.


4:15 am

dull
pain
in my
back pulls me
out of bed to pee
now I’m outside with the puppy


Monday, April 19, 2010

Running in April in Michigan, or...(another FIB!)

I penned this poem earlier this month after a run with my dog Gypsy, but the sentiments are still appropriate after the temperature extremes this past week!  (It's another FIB, check out Gregory K's blog:  GottaBook.  Thanks again, Gregory!)


Running in April in Michigan or, Nature's Disenchanted Intimacy

Two
days
ago
we ran hot,
skin sizzled to touch.
Today, measured breath is frigid.


Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Finger Sweep

Poem day.   Here's a "FIB" inspired by my many walks with young puppies.  Check out Gregory K's blog, "GottaBook" for the detailed definition of a FIB:  a 20 syllable poem based on the mathematical "Fibonacci sequence."  You'll appreciate my verse if you've ever found yourself wishing you had named your puppy "Kirby" (as in the "vacuum").


Finger Sweep

butts,
gum
wrappers
leaf, stone, twig,
plastic thingy, rock.
Litter-picker-upper puppy